Jordan Writing Sample November 2013

Once upon a time there was a deadly whisper,a whisper that everyone was afraid of.This whisper had been around for many,many years and generations.One day a couple was searching for a new home for them and children David and Charlie.The day after that they decided that they would go for a drive around the city and seek for a new home to purchase.The family had been driving around hours and hours so decided to throw in the towel and headed back to the motel.

The next day the sun had come up,and the family had woken up.The mother yelled out to the family”Come on guys its saturday morning lets go and check if there are houses for sale today.As they were driving around the place david sees a group of people crwding aroud this beautiful looking household so tellls his mother about it.So the mother pulls over and goes and has a look,and what do you know there is a house that is for sale.

It was an auction.A few moments later the mother had won the auction,and was very excited about the new home that they are going to stay in.The mother had bought the new house for $33.000.

She was so excited she went and told the good news to the family.The family had shifted all their furniture and other stuff of the motel and into their new beautiful place that they can finally call home.The family were so tired they went to bed.

As the parents were tucking their children into bed the father hears a strange but  a  loud whisper coming from the basement saying “HELP ME”,So he quickly went to check it out.Slowly the father opens the door feeling scared and nervous at the same time he walks down the steps”BOOM!!!” the door shuts right in his face and down he goes down the steps,the father tries to yell for help but he was too late.He hears the whisper and knows its to late the whisper whispers and..To be continued...